Well the month is nearly over, and progress is kinda slowing down, i have completed the prolouge and 4 and a half chapters. I am still really interested in writting this but am finding it hard to find time to do so, will write some more today and tomorrow hopefully.
If there is anyone out there who knows a proper proofreader for my story, in order to check grammar and spelling, please drop us a line it would be great to know.
And any suggestions on the plot line from anyone would be also welcomed, may not use them in the story but will definently take them into consideraton.
Just to keep you inthrawled here is some of chapter 5
DGirl
Michael knew that David was invisible but because he was fallen he could still see the angels, and in their angelic form as well. “What are you doing here…?” Michael whispered as to not wake everyone that was asleep in the houses around. David turned around instantly, “I guess the question is what are you doing here… we told you to stay away, didn’t we?” David stated matter of fact like.
Michael was apprehensive to respond to the question but said “I have been keeping an eye on her so she hasn’t been harmed by Peter or yourself.” “Well I am standing guard today for Peter and you shouldn’t be here” Just then a car went past and Michael ducked behind the bush that David was hidden behind also.
“You should leave” Michael said, “You and Peter wont scare me away from the chance I have……if you don’t leave I will make you leave.” David was full angel so was a lot stronger and faster than Michael, he stood no chance taking on David but was determined not to let the opportunity to be saved pass him. David studied him and decided it would be best not to engage him here outside the house of the girl that he was trying to keep Michael away from. “Fine I will leave, but Peter will not be happy that you are creeping round and watching her, this will involved severe pain for you in the long run if you don’t leave.”